I much more than liked it! It was a joy to read. You created a fascinating original character, who I could clearly see and hear, and used him well. Little touches like the spell to help Muggle parents avoid spilling wizarding secrets, and Daniel's meeting Sully were fascinating, and added depth to the story. The twists and turns of Harry and Draco's relationship were very believable and kept me thoroughly engrossed, and all the other relationships were well handled too - I was particularly impressed by the way you dealt with Snape and Hermione working together and kept them so in character.
I loved the richness of your descriptions: I can see the Auror headquarters and the chinese restaurant and Draco's flat. And the Carr/Lestrange plot was excellent.
As for the thought of Snape at a fashion show... *snickers*
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Date: 2005-06-06 09:45 pm (UTC)I loved the richness of your descriptions: I can see the Auror headquarters and the chinese restaurant and Draco's flat. And the Carr/Lestrange plot was excellent.
As for the thought of Snape at a fashion show... *snickers*