(I trusted you to give us a happy ending) but from the first overheard conversations to Izumi's heartbreaking foray back into rentboy-dom to the excruciating unravelling of all the tangled webs and misunderstandings in the last section -- the entire journey was accompanied by a voice in my head moaning (in much enjoyment!), 'Oh noooo you boobies, noooo!'
Exquisite, excruciating, and ultimately so v satisfying.
(Btw, I finally read the Long Way Home manga you kindly uploaded, and golly, Viki - I liked your story a hundred times better, for the depiction of emotional depth and tenderness!)
So, this story is not based on any Miyamoto Kano plot? Much applause to you. It was completely absorbing, and I wish you'd write more of this universe.
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Date: 2008-06-27 03:22 pm (UTC)I loved this.
So much.
(I trusted you to give us a happy ending) but from the first overheard conversations to Izumi's heartbreaking foray back into rentboy-dom to the excruciating unravelling of all the tangled webs and misunderstandings in the last section -- the entire journey was accompanied by a voice in my head moaning (in much enjoyment!), 'Oh noooo you boobies, noooo!'
Exquisite, excruciating, and ultimately so v satisfying.
(Btw, I finally read the Long Way Home manga you kindly uploaded, and golly, Viki - I liked your story a hundred times better, for the depiction of emotional depth and tenderness!)
So, this story is not based on any Miyamoto Kano plot? Much applause to you. It was completely absorbing, and I wish you'd write more of this universe.