Outside, It's America

ahh, i see. yeah, i wouldn't point out something like that, but more things that confused me or that didn't work for me regarding characterizations. i guess it would be easier to assess an author's choices if the prompt were included somewhere in the header [which is something i don't do when writing a fest fic, but it's certainly worth thinking about]. i guess i'm thinking that the author will always be able to point things out to me after the reveal and when they repond to comments.