Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed Daniel's big scene. That's the one I mumbled about having to completely rewrite three times. Daniel didn't have a POV chapter in drafts 1 or 2, but by 3 he did. isiscolo really is the one to thank - she insisted that scene would play out best if he showed us, and she was right.
The fight scene was finished early and was one of the few I didn't fuss with afterwards. Must be the upbringing - I've seen enough silly ranting arguments.
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Date: 2005-05-20 03:33 am (UTC)The fight scene was finished early and was one of the few I didn't fuss with afterwards. Must be the upbringing - I've seen enough silly ranting arguments.