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geoviki ([personal profile] geoviki) wrote2005-05-05 08:11 am

Gratuitous overuse of the frog analogy

A recent book review in our newspaper read:

Wallace Stegner writes ... that the difficulty with explicit sex in novels is that it invariably usurps all else that the author is attempting to accomplish:

"The trouble with excessive sexuality, in novels or in life, is that it is so compellingly interesting and attention-holding that it makes everything else seem tame or dull; it crowds off the page whole areas of human experience and human feeling that belong there but can't maintain their foothold."

Such is the case in Sue Miller's newest novel, Lost in the Forest. Although Miller's exploration of grief and self-discovery is both compelling and insightful, the sexual trysts of 16-year-old Daisy are so unforgivingly explicit that Miller's attempts to uncover the depth of who Daisy is are muddled by a nipple here and an arched back there....


I thought this over and decided that somewhere, I had crossed over to where this wasn't true for me. I've noticed that after reading fan fiction for nearly two years, I no longer find excessive sexuality all that distracting. It's like the classic analogy of the frog in slowly heating water: little by little, I no longer notice the erosion of my ability to be shocked, tittilated, or even surprised by graphic writing. I have become comfortably numb.

How about you?

Aside: Does anyone have an mp3 of Led Zeppelin's Stairway to Heaven that I can, er, borrow? Got it. Thanks, Paula!

[identity profile] silentauror.livejournal.com 2005-05-05 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the Oreo analogy above - I'm not only happily desensitized to the smut; if the cream in the Oreo isn't there, I'm not eating the dry cookie part! I want it all, damn it! If properly used, sex is the ultimate writer's tool. It enhances everything. It can be used so many different ways - for tension, for angst, for resolution, for crime, even. I love it. :)

Funny that you should have just posted, when I'm in the thralls of re-reading ATBT in completion again (i.e., rather than just my favourite scenes!). I love it. I love being lost in it. So glad you wrote it, and that's it's just there, whenever I need to read it. :)

[identity profile] geoviki.livejournal.com 2005-05-05 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you said a lot by calling sex a "tool", though. It's got to serve the story. I know a lot of writers will slap on the "PWP" label on stuff that's short and graphic. But to me, if the story's got a point to make, and the sex helps make that point, it's not just gratuitous smut. However, if it truly is just "oh, here they are, let's get it on", then I do lose interest. I've just read too much of it.

[identity profile] silentauror.livejournal.com 2005-05-06 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, most certainly. It needs to enhance the plot, and the plot, in turn, enhances it. One of my best friends is a gay man, and he's often said that straight sex in movies is better than gay porn, for the sole reason of one having plot and the other not. Even if it's PWP, I say it has to have some sort of context, something to give it fuel.

[identity profile] geoviki.livejournal.com 2005-05-06 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
And I'm glad you're enjoying a reread of ATBT. You'll be so far ahead of the rest of the class, because I'm really really (honest this time) going to post the sequel next week.

[identity profile] anno-domino.livejournal.com 2005-05-06 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
SEQUEL??

Oh, happy day!

[identity profile] silentauror.livejournal.com 2005-05-06 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
*is speechless with joy*

Really?!! Mwahhhh! I'm insanely excited, Viki! Seriously! :) (In case that wasn't clear yet... ) :) So looking forward to that! :)