how Harry feels physically, all turned on and hard and ready, knowing that his cock is about to be engulfed in Draco's hot mouth.
Because that's exactly the kind of thing I've read over and over and over (and sometimes even in those precise words) so that it's lost its impact. Whereas the intellectual/emotional background is where the author takes the story and makes it sing. Or cry. Or whinny for that matter.
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Date: 2005-05-06 04:49 am (UTC)how Harry feels physically, all turned on and hard and ready, knowing that his cock is about to be engulfed in Draco's hot mouth.
Because that's exactly the kind of thing I've read over and over and over (and sometimes even in those precise words) so that it's lost its impact. Whereas the intellectual/emotional background is where the author takes the story and makes it sing. Or cry. Or whinny for that matter.