See, now I want to know more about the conversation Yui had with Katou and about Yui's situation with his brother...

The story there is just messy and complicated, just like real men's lives are. *laughs* Isn't everyone's?!

I'd leave "smorgasbord" in - maybe add "delectable" or "sensual" just to soften it a bit. (Or did you do that already? I'm writing this without looking at the fic just now.) But it totally works for me; really, what better way to describe it?

Yay for the upcoming Daniel!!