Oh. That first was just... Such a creative idea way to portray this! ... Ha, the words aren't coming to me. But I loved how it's Percy-sympathetic without overdoing the Percy-angst or inner turmoil, because it's hard to do that just right. It's subtle but really nails the unsettling and eventually desperate remorse I'm sure Percy must be silently enduring in the canon. Good stuff. :D
I can't believe your wrote these under a time limit. I mean, you managed to change from real, hurting regret to mildly nostalgic wistfulness to a hysterically awkward Minerva/Hagrid (eeewXD!) moment -- all with limited time. Wow. :D
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Such a creative idea way to portray this!
...
Ha, the words aren't coming to me. But I loved how it's Percy-sympathetic without overdoing the Percy-angst or inner turmoil, because it's hard to do that just right. It's subtle but really nails the unsettling and eventually desperate remorse I'm sure Percy must be silently enduring in the canon.
Good stuff. :D
I can't believe your wrote these under a time limit. I mean, you managed to change from real, hurting regret to mildly nostalgic wistfulness to a hysterically awkward Minerva/Hagrid (eeewXD!) moment -- all with limited time. Wow. :D