Well I adore the sequel and it is in no way, shape, or form a commentary yon the writing. I actually think lack of comments has everything to do with the temporarily disabled "favorites" function on skyhawke. Since they post fic as it appears and several people have dumped several stories (like 10-12) on all at once, your fic automatically went "off" the page pretty damn quick. You might want to wait until they fix that function and then "repost" (or "edit) so that this comes up again so that people can see that it's alive and kicking.

This is a beautiful piece of writing. Make no mistake.