ext_59433 ([identity profile] elsie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] geoviki 2005-05-12 09:28 pm (UTC)

alrighty, i'm back now that i've read the last two chapters, to give more comments! blab blab blab, i can't stop.

***spoilers below! in case anybody hasn't read yet.

ok, so i just KNEW that draco's "magical emissions" had to have some importance sometime! i did the biggest squee when i realized draco was getting ready to have a magical outburst at just the right time.

good job on the polyjuiced!carr bit. i was actually quite surprised, and then i was really happy that i was surprised, because that's always tons of fun. of course i figured out that carr was evil and would show his true colors eventually, but the actual mechanism of it caught me off guard.

i just have to give another huge SQUEE to daniel. he is possibly my favorite OC ever. his POV sections were laugh-out-loud hilarious...dean "praying in latin," the magical characters talking knowingly about what weapon sully might have used on herself...and this line!! Good lord. Bit macabre, isn't it? And redundant. I mean,
if you're still here, isn't it obvious you lived?
that has pretty much always been my take on harry's unfortunate title. not that i don't also see the serious side to it, but really...*snerk*

completely wonderful fic, especially when combined with ATBT! i can't wait to read this over and over and over...

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