I'm really quite glad I read ATBT recently, so that I'll be all prepared for the sequel. :) Oh, and I can review it chapter by chapter, instead of cheating and doing it bulk-method. *blushes*
Whoever this dude is, you've immediately created interest in him, I must say.
although not completely; where was the sport in that?
Phrases like that, so innocent and throwaway, reveal so much. Although of course, you knew that already. *grins*
Unnatural, his partner never failed to mutter at the sight of such neatness.
Birrova Percy Weasley, then, eh? ^_^ --Oh yay, I got the ickle smiley thing face whatjamacallit right! First time! *pats self on back and eyes those who're laughing at her*--
Carr finally sank down in his desk chair, which objected to his weight with an undignified squeak, and picked up the letter.
Absolutely the best line, though. The structure or the onomatopoeia or something...
I am agog as two gogs to see where he's going and who's the letter from and oh! so many things. However -- it may just be me, but, in case -- I never hear it referred to cologne, or indeed written on bottles as cologne, it's aftershave. *le shrug* A minor detail and I may be wrong, but when the rest is so great it does jar, ever so slightly...
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Whoever this dude is, you've immediately created interest in him, I must say.
although not completely; where was the sport in that?
Phrases like that, so innocent and throwaway, reveal so much. Although of course, you knew that already. *grins*
Unnatural, his partner never failed to mutter at the sight of such neatness.
Birrova Percy Weasley, then, eh? ^_^ --Oh yay, I got the ickle smiley thing face whatjamacallit right! First time! *pats self on back and eyes those who're laughing at her*--
Carr finally sank down in his desk chair, which objected to his weight with an undignified squeak, and picked up the letter.
Absolutely the best line, though. The structure or the onomatopoeia or something...
I am agog as two gogs to see where he's going and who's the letter from and oh! so many things. However -- it may just be me, but, in case -- I never hear it referred to cologne, or indeed written on bottles as cologne, it's aftershave. *le shrug* A minor detail and I may be wrong, but when the rest is so great it does jar, ever so slightly...
*salaams excessively*